BAND 9.0 Reports: Bar Charts – Mobile Phones vs. Landlines

T1 Bar Charts - Countries

THINGS TO REMEMBER

  1. This chart is only for one period of time, so there are NO trends. You need to write about the similarities and differences, highs and lows.
  2. Use the present simple tense.
  3. Your structure should be (i) Introduction (ii) Overview (iii) 2 body paragraphs with a clear topic for each and details that support your overview.

T1 Bar Charts - Countries

STEP-BY-STEP GUIDE

NOTE – Synonyms and advanced vocabulary are in bold. Linking and descriptive vocabulary are in italics.

STEP 1 – INTRODUCTION

The chart above shows the number of mobile phones and landlines per 100 people in 7 countries.

SAMPLE ANSWER – “The chart presents the quantity of mobile phones and landlines for every 100 people in Canada, the United States, and five European countries.”

TIPS – (i) DON’T worry about synonyms for the groups (i.e. “mobile phones”/”landlines”). Make sure your introduction is clear (ii) Try to use synonyms for common words like the verb “shows” and other words like “number”.

T1 Bar Charts - Countries

STEP TWO – OVERVIEW

SAMPLE ANSWER – “Overall, mobile phones are more common than landlines in four out of the seven countries, with only 2 countries having fewer than 50 percent of people with a mobile phone. On the other hand, only one country has more than 70 landlines per one hundred people.

TIPS – (1) Try to compare the two groups and see if you can notice any similarities or differences (2) Ask yourself “which ones are higher/lower/similar/different?”

STEP THREE – BODY

SAMPLE ANSWER – “With regard to mobile phones, Italy has the highest percentage, with a figure of 90%, while Sweden, the UK, and Denmark all have more than 80 mobile phones per 100 people. In contrast, Canada and the United States have the lowest percentage of mobile phones per capita, with figures of 38 and 48 percent, respectively.”

As for landlines, Italy only has the lowest number of landlines at just over 40 per 100 people, which is less than half the number amount of mobile phones. Conversely, there are 63 landlines for every 100 people in Canada, and that is significantly greater than the figure for mobile phones. The country with the largest proportion of landlines is Denmark (88%), while the second-placed countries in the chart – the US and Sweden – have just under 70 landlines per 100 people, which is slightly more than Canada, Germany, and the UK, whose landline percentages hover around 60 percent.”

TIPS – (1) You might not have time to write about every piece of data. That’s OK (2) Make sure you write about the highest and the lowest figures and any major similarities or differences (3) Try to use a wide range of describing words for comparisons and data (4) You MUST make COMPARISONS. If you just LIST the data (i.e. “This country has this many mobile phones and this many landlines, while that country has this many mobile phones and this many landlines”) you will NOT get a good mark!

T1 Bar Charts - Countries

FULL SAMPLE ANSWER

The chart presents the quantity of mobile phones and landlines for every 100 people in Canada, the United States, and five European countries

Overall, mobile phones are more common than landlines in four out of the seven countries, with only 2 countries having fewer than 50 percent of people with a mobile phone. On the other hand, only one country has more than 70 landlines per hundred people.

With regard to mobile phones, Italy has the highest percentage, with a figure of 90%, while Sweden, the UK, and Denmark all have more than 80 mobile phones per 100 people. In contrast, Canada and the United States have the lowest percentage of mobile phones per capita, with figures of 38 and 48 percent, respectively.

As for landlines, Italy only has the lowest number of landlines at just over 40 per 100 people, which is less than half the number amount of mobile phones. Conversely, there are 63 landlines for every 100 people in Canada, and that is significantly greater than its figure for mobile phones. The country with by far the largest proportion of landlines is Denmark (88%), while the second-placed countries in the chart – the US and Sweden – have just under 70 landlines per 100 people, which is slightly more than Canada, Germany, and the UK, whose landline percentages hover around 60 percent. (223 words)

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